[sgrcltpunk]

yesterday i had some shit go down and im really depressed and full of hate so here is what i wrote its a metal song its called tearing me me apart

its tearing me apart from the inside
I watch my blood flow down the drain
all I care is that its ending
I find that I am all that's sane

piece me back together
ill just fall back apart again
some say this is not forever
ill prove them all wrong again
all I have are the memories
they are just a blank page
ive forgotten all that's come to me
NOTHING WILL BE THE SAME

its tearing me apart from the inside
I watch my blood flow down the drain
all I care is that its ending
I find that I am all that's sane

feeling as if ive lost my indescretion
ive lost everything i had
suicide feels like my solution
hate is the only thing i have
death is the only thing that resonates
deep down inside my hell
i represent all that i hate
I JUST HOPE I DIE

i hope i die
i hope i die
i hope you DIE

its tearing me apart from the inside
I watch my blood flow down the drain
all I care is that its ending
I find that I am all that's SANE

[95StangMX]

Problems with the chica huh?.....There is always that chick that wanted to bang you that you felt was a test....I dont see her anywhere in the song though? DID what ever the problemo suicide is no answer. Its the pussy way out so quit thinking that shit and get your ass back up in the saddle and roll out bro....

[sgrcltpunk]

no see that girl that it thought was real and was a test was just a way so this ex of mine could try to get for child support and we dont know if its mine and its just too much shit

[95StangMX]

huh? english please

[sgrcltpunk]

the girl that was trying to get with me and i said it was a test was my ex trying to get my info so she could get me for child support and we dont know who's it is and its got me so mad and depressed at the same time

[95StangMX]

ah ok gotcha.....so did you and your girl break up cause of this

[sgrcltpunk]

no but this has just got me pissed cause everything was perfect in my life now its all gonna go to shit

[95StangMX]

how has it all gone to shit just cause some chick my or may not be having your kid? big deal...get joint custody and buy the kid as much shit as you can and get receipts. the more time you have the kid and the more you buy it the less you have to pay in child support.....in fact if you can get custody you can make her pay you child support....I would first get a DNA test to prove it was yours....havent you been engaged to your girl for a long time now? How far along is the chick having the baby?

[sgrcltpunk]

baby is 3 years old but i dont want to be a dad she lied to me to get her pregers she told me she was on the pill and so after a moth we proceeded to have sex with just bc as protection but she wasn't really on it

[95StangMX]

so I am assuming you have done the math and there is a chance that you slept with her 3 years and 9 months ago? If so does the kid look ANYthing like YOU? This sounds like its time for you to call 1-800-GO-MAURY. He will do the DNA test for free...especially with this case it sounds like you got a pretty good story....she sends over a decoy to act like she wants to bang you just to get your info? What the hell info did she need tht she had to send that chick to get?

[sgrcltpunk]

kid looks like the other dude but you cant tell cause of that but she sent the chick to the mall and she got my plates on my car and traced those to my address

[95StangMX]

wow sounds like a real psycho......I am willing to bet most of my money its not your kid thats why you have heard nothing of this for 3 years now the other dude left her or something and she is just looking for $$$$crilla

[sgrcltpunk]

^^^^^ ding ding ding but what do you think of the song

[95StangMX]

hahaha.............song what song?




just kidding it was ..........ahem.........dark...and a little well um depressing I guess.....I mean it went together well but I am just not into Killing yourself type of shit....but it was nicely written

[sgrcltpunk]

gahhhh newayz yea shes always been psyco

[95StangMX]

I mean you have talent it sounds like as far as writing goes....just hard for me to get into anything talking about suicide....I have a real weird thing with it....its like I dont know how to explain it.....Like some people hate cockroaches....I hate things dealing with suicide cause i just find it really weak.....but I definately think you have a talent for writing and hope you dont feel like your song bro cause its not the end of the world and its prolly not even your kid so dont let it bother you....she probably just did this to cause problems with you and your girl and hoping that if you thought it was yours that you would go back to her........let me ask you this....did her boyfriend recently dump her?

[99Outlaw]

^^ I agree.. suicide is the easy way out.. friends and family are always there to help

[Dansby]

First line made me think of this...

YouTube - Broadcast Yourself.

YouTube - Broadcast Yourself.

[XTCNAGT]

I know it's easy for someone on the outside to say...

But life's a rollercoaster ride man...don't miss the scenery during the ups, nor panic through the downs. It's a shit situation, that's for sure, but it'll all work out for the good, and she'll get hers. Put a no contact order on her.

The song, although yeah, dark and focused on a solution that no one should ponder, was actually good. You have a good way with words, and turning thoughts into something that could easily have music put to it.

[sgrcltpunk]

its supposed to be metal